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by Anonymous

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by My Erotic Tale02/04/05

Art~

hey Man~
nice poem ...a womans body
very clever and tinted with erotic
I may not get through all that is
posted for this day but I will try.

nice illustrated poetry

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by duddle14612/25/06

Good try.

An attempt to format a poem in the shape of a woman's body. The illustration doesn't quite succeed. Somewhat whimsical in it's approach.

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by Amyfriend01/29/07

Nice try...

but lacks spirit...

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by LeBroz02/04/07

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Ouch. Send this one back to the drawing board. The 'shape' is chaotic - I don't recall seeing any woman with a 'body' that awful and spell check your work before putting them into an illustration.

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by tazz31701/23/12

AND DIAMONDS ARE FOREVER

but it is not yours. TK U MLJ LV NV

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