by thedogman77004
Beautiful work! The only thing I would suggest is to be careful with the punctuation. There were some periods in areas that should've been commas. It didn't seem to interrupt with the flow, but thought I'd give you a heads up. Thanks for the read. I very much enjoyed, saldne
And watch the way you use its versus it's; the former's a possessive and the latter a contraction of it is.