All Comments on 'To Be With You'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
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Beautiful work! The only thing I would suggest is to be careful with the punctuation. There were some periods in areas that should've been commas. It didn't seem to interrupt with the flow, but thought I'd give you a heads up. Thanks for the read. I very much enjoyed, saldne

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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And watch the way you use its versus it's; the former's a possessive and the latter a contraction of it is.

AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
To Hell...

and back.. to find his true love.

tazz317tazz317about 12 years ago
TRANSFERENCE OF THOUGHTS

wanting the controls. TK U MLJ LV NV

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