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by Anonymous

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by duddle14612/29/06

Steady.

When it comes to dreams ~ the harder you work - the luckier you get. This poet has a delicate way with words. Enjoyable.

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by LeBroz02/07/07

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Here's a bit of a cliché laden piece, with sentiments true.

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by Amyfriend02/09/07

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Life is carved in jello not stone.

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by tazz31702/20/12

SIMPLICITY AND MODERATION

ways of life, ways to live. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by tazz31703/11/12

#2 GIVING THE BEAN COUNTERS

a mode to exist TK U MLJ LV NV

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