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by Anonymous

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by Amyfriend01/26/07

As husband and wife..

God will stand by and watch over you...

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by LeBroz02/09/07

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Nice sentiments but color contrasts weak in spots and could also have benefited from a careful edit.

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by LeBroz02/09/07

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Nice sentiments but color contrasts weak in spots and could also have benefited from a careful edit.

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by tazz31704/17/12

THE GIFT GIVEN

always has value to be discovered, TK U MLJ LV NV

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