All Comments on 'Fortune Smiled'

Wish I could say it in Japanese, but excellent writing. Grandmother would be proud.

please accept this english saying " an absolute belta" I cannot reiterate how much I enjoyed it

James UK

Another great story from you.Thank you.

Thank you for your efforts, a very entertaining read, Has great potential for more.

NorthPacific

I recently found this and went back to read your previous works. They all have good stories and charters, and I can readily see the improvement in your work over time. The insights into the Asian culture are wonderful. But...

Your stories, almost to a fault, stop instead of coming to a conclusion, as if you left the last chapter or partial chapter unpublished.

I will look forward to more, but will hope for better finishes.

To repeat, I really enjoyed this story. The mechanics were good, story and character development was just right. Hell, you even gave explanations to the Japanese words you used. You wouldn't believe how many authors leave you hanging by using different languages with giving the meaning.

Again, nice job, please continue to publish on Lit.

Great story credible characters - really enjoyed it

please keep writing

Such a finely woven tapestry...could not stop once I started!!!

Great writing and story telling.

But still trying to work out your math for the time difference. If I have it right, midnight of 3rd Friday of June in Denver, makes it 3am on 2nd Sunday of August. Got it...showing smug satisfied smile.

Domo arigato gozaimasu. Very intriguing. Complete thoughts. Mysterious and concrete. Evoked emotions. I wish for a temple visit like this one.

Great story thanks for taking the time to form such a great read

I think this was my third read through in as many years. I typed Honshu in the search engine, found the story and began reading again. I connect with the story and had a cry here and there. Thank you.

Love the story. I think it very, very good. AAAAAA++++++

Excellent! Excellent! Excellent!

Great moving story. I enjoyed this one very much.