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Bee-careful

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by Anonymous

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by bamagirl01/27/05

Cute

You always make me smile :)

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by Annora01/27/05

Who hasn't had this happen?

Wow, so true. What a great way it was written. You can hear the buzzing.Loved the great descriptive flying sounds.

It's a great short read.

Well done my friend. Stands on it's merits.

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by LeBroz08/10/05

GEORGIA TECH RULES

Art ~
How could you so demean that poor picked on little creature - the poor maligned Yellow Jacket - the Georgia Tech Yellow Jacket - the shame !!

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BTW - the verse IS funny - just watch where you sit - bzzzz, bzzzzzzzzz

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by duddle14602/07/07

clever

Quite a creative rendering ~ the flight and plight of a Bee.

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by tazz31705/14/12

I SWALLOWED A BEE IN MY SOFT DRINK

it should have been a beer, TK U MLJ LV NV

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