All Comments on 'What If?'

What a wonderful, tender, passionate, loving, intensely sexual erotic tribute to a wonderful woman. The prose flows as does the woman. Very very excellent.

Captures the true anticipation of lovers that have spent long periods of time apart. A wonderful adaptation.

..I was kitty. Very sweet, touching and romantic!

left me wishing I was Kitty.

the love, adoration, want... is something every woman

craves.

Excellent writing. I look forward to reading more from you.

It may be that I don't read enough here, but of those stories I have read, this one is about the best for demonstrating the love, passion and adoration of the total of a beloved. This is a marvelous reflection of all that is best in the merging of two people!

Thank you for a reminder of that which we would all love to be a part of!

Writing more, I hope!