All Comments on '"WHAT?" Ch. 01'

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Comentarista82Comentarista82almost 6 years ago
Interesting...

...but who is this? At first I thought Jess, but Dan would have recognized her, so was it maybe the stewardess from the plane?

Hot for sure and on that point, 5. I'd love to know who this was though.

Comentarista82Comentarista82almost 6 years ago
Reread it..

...has to be Jess. But how did Dan not recognize her or did he set his poor "buddy" up? :o This could come to blows!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Casserole?

A luggage casserole? Yuck. I bet it needs ketchup.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Great erotic read. But who's the mystery woman? The air hostess? The moment he sees her, he thinks, "I know her. But hair colour is wrong and so is her eye colour...But what is she doing here?" Or could it be his own mother? Either of them could have changed their hair colour and put on coloured eye lenses. Besides, while fucking in his hotel room, she keeps saying, "Mother fucker!" So she could be his mother.

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