All Comments on 'Swallow'

Very different and lots of fun. I like this story a lot!

I didn't start out with the intention of writing in second person, but it worked well, I think.

Thanks for commenting - glad you enjoyed it!

Please...

that's poetry, great lecture, well done!

You're very kind. Thank you.

Awesome story, thank you for sharing your thoughts, and time with us all.

You're welcome. I just wish I could get into that chair for real...

Was This Training, or; Giving What She Wants and Needs? Great Story!

Well, it starts off non-consensual and ends up enthusiastic consent.

The real question is what happens next...

Thanks for commenting! :-)

I would get in the chair. Especially if it pulled my hair.

Hmm... I like that idea.

Almost makes me want to be in the chair. Great idea well written. Xx

I should patent the idea...

Thank You

You're very welcome... :-)

That was so hot!

Sometimes you don't cool down with a good blow...

Boody Great I was Alina but I am male. Not gay not really Bi but I could imagine this I want it. !

Don't have to be gay to love cock...

utter crap

Clearly you haven't read my other stories.

This... woulda really hit the spot, but I'm just not a fan of second person POV. Author's got talent, though

crap

Very good and interesting story line! 5*

Keep your talent! Tanks for posting!

Great story, love the conditioning aspect

Cool story and I like the format AlinaX! I think it left a nice amount open to mystery. I perhaps would have liked a little more clarity on what position she was tied and how, I presume she's blindfolded or ears covered but it's hard to tell. Thanks for posting

You're welcome, & thanks. I've enjoyed several of your stories over the years. :-)

I thought I would never voluntarily read a 2P story, let alone give it 5 stars.

It will never happen again....