The Ultimate Revenge

Really can't see why I gave it a 2, first time. Change it to a 1.

Just too much over the top, and copied too many almost identical stories.

DWnorcal is so stupid

he takes notes when he watches the Three Stooges

Damn

That's taking retaliation to the ultimate. She deserved prison. Fuck her.

Dwornock...

was forced to eat his grandmother's faeces as a child. Clearly, he grew up to be the man he is today: a speaker of nothing but shit...

Loved it!

Very creative plot. Excellent writing. Too bad the husband had to die, but it drives the point home. This will stay with me for a while.

Very good

There is a somewhat similar story (similar in the concept at least) by Britease: No Way Honey -- Anne.

An interesting alternative version of this story would be the relationship between Doug and Helen if Doug is able to safely get out of the burning house.

One question

She's guilty of manslaughter. Why isn't she is jail?

She is in jail, can't you read and interpret?

I would say the punishment is less than she deserved. Five years would be about right. She should get a year for just the idea. She should have divorced him instead of this stupid revenge. Let her suffer.

Good Story But

He was honest, he did his level best to abstain and the worry of ticking off his clients and partners allowed him to consuider ONLY a blow job so...

I understand her anger, even some hurt but she knew he was as honest as the day is long and knew damn well he would never intentionally hurt her so...

Way over the top. Good story. Had he lived, I would have enjoyed his divorcing her and even at that, he would always care about her except...now he knew she was easy!

Anyway, Thanks!!!

Jeez

First read this almost three years ago. More thoughts. First he cheated and confessed. Then she cheated for revenge. Yes, she got her revenge fuck in. Then he died because he was tied to the bed watching her cheat.
I guess revenge fucks really don't work, huh?

the story was a little to light for me

in have the stories her, he husband gets 20 years for less. She kills her husband and gets 5, what about the guys she was fucking, he didn't get anything.

TWAT!

What happens to the baby due to this murdering,thoughtless twat's actions! Hubby would have had to divorce her and leave his job anyway. ~ I guess she was just plain stupid!

Second time through...

five stars. An outstanding flash tale.

Stories like this involve the suspension of sound judgment. It is the nature of the flash and this is a perfect example. Yes, she had to have been stupid. Did she think he wouldn't divorce her ass after she was through?

The stupid cunt

She got almost everything she deserved. She should have gotten life without parole. Or better yet death by fire just like her husband had to suffer. Anyway...... ABSOLUTELY DAMN GOOD STORY. Another 5 stars from me.

5-Stars For The Writing

I guess you might say you got your point across. This is the second time I've read it. But this is my first comment. I have had a couple of nightmares in my life quite similar to what happened to Doug. In my dreams my cheating wife has drugged
me and tied me as Helen did Doug. But in my dream, my wife calls in a group of men...a friend, a neighbor, my boss, a coworker, and my brother. After an entire weekend, they force more sleeping medicine into me. When it takes effect, they remove the bindings. Everyone but my wife leave and she sets fire to the house before leaving, burning me to death. Everyone is at my boss's yard party when firetrucks arrive, unable to save my life.

Writing was ok

But super sick bitch.

1*

absurd shit.

He deserved to die.

Any man that is stupid enough to go home and tell his wife that he received a BJ from a stripper deserves to die. If he had just kept his cool and not opened his mouth all of this would have been moot. Well written and a change of pace but it was all so unnecessary. Thanks for writing.