that was amazing, within two minutes of reading it and my panties were getting damp thanks to the hot girl on girl... keep it up an get in touch with me if you want to indulge anymore...
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Anonymous01/31/05
confusing
Nice story. Well written with some good erotic descriptions== bad mistake though to introduce gorgeous sexy female as sister, then wife ,then sister---I assume you meant her to be sister but it's a little confusing to have to figure who a leading character is. Nice effort though. The Ct. Tankee
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Anonymous02/06/05
(ister, wife) ook closer
it looks to be that a lot of you need to reed closer, and here is y. Robert introduced Deborah to Kelly as his sister, but Deborah introduced herslef as Robert's wife
Well written good begining. And people PUHLEASE it's called a literary device. He introed her as "sister". The sister, involved with her brother and having no prior knowlege of the new girl in tow, tried to cover intimacy in public with the brother by saying "wife". Let's face it, every brother and sister engaged in incest go out to fancy public resturants and announce their relationship to the world at large. Right?
It's called a plot thread or literary device. A written action that is designed to distract the characters momentarily to advance the plot or action.
Or it was just a mistake in which case "OH WELL SO WHAT!" get over it already.
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Anonymous12/19/09
Send me an angel
She obviously introduced herself as his wife because she didn't know who the girl was. Most people frown on incest so to protect themselves they introduce themselves as a married couple. Get with it people.
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Anonymous12/18/12
Sister or Wife
Did they meet his sister or his wife? I don't care as long as this story continues.
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Anonymous06/01/16
So fucking hot
Fab Brett, the hot bitch is obviously so greedy for cock and cunt, I want some action like that, more and more of this and soon like yesterday. Cunt lapping sex maniac uk.
English
Just a tease?
I will withdraw my vote if more Hot Tub adventures are not
forthcoming! Hurry!
wife or sister?
first you say it's his sister, then his wife. which is it?
wow
that was amazing, within two minutes of reading it and my panties were getting damp thanks to the hot girl on girl... keep it up an get in touch with me if you want to indulge anymore...
confusing
Nice story. Well written with some good erotic descriptions== bad mistake though to introduce gorgeous sexy female as sister, then wife ,then sister---I assume you meant her to be sister but it's a little confusing to have to figure who a leading character is. Nice effort though. The Ct. Tankee
(ister, wife) ook closer
it looks to be that a lot of you need to reed closer, and here is y. Robert introduced Deborah to Kelly as his sister, but Deborah introduced herslef as Robert's wife
Good begining!
Well written good begining. And people PUHLEASE it's called a literary device. He introed her as "sister". The sister, involved with her brother and having no prior knowlege of the new girl in tow, tried to cover intimacy in public with the brother by saying "wife". Let's face it, every brother and sister engaged in incest go out to fancy public resturants and announce their relationship to the world at large. Right?
It's called a plot thread or literary device. A written action that is designed to distract the characters momentarily to advance the plot or action.
Or it was just a mistake in which case "OH WELL SO WHAT!" get over it already.
Send me an angel
She obviously introduced herself as his wife because she didn't know who the girl was. Most people frown on incest so to protect themselves they introduce themselves as a married couple. Get with it people.
Sister or Wife
Did they meet his sister or his wife? I don't care as long as this story continues.
So fucking hot
Fab Brett, the hot bitch is obviously so greedy for cock and cunt, I want some action like that, more and more of this and soon like yesterday. Cunt lapping sex maniac uk.
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