All Comments on 'A Life Changing Event - Paris Ch. 02'

appears to be the same as Paris chapter 1. Was there supposed to be an updated chapter? Love the story BTW.

well now that your wife has found somebody that can satisfy her, is she even going to bother coming back? What happens when Terra finds out how you don't know how to satisfy a woman? Lets face it. If you were any good in bed your wife wouldn't have denied you anything. And she wouldn't have gone looking no matter the amount of money being offered. Also with the amount of money being paid, she wouldn't of had to go back, but she did. Why? She was rich already she didn't need the extra money. Another thing is she can't divorce you because of the contract she signed. What I wanted to know is what happened when she came back from Paris? Did she keep you just so she wouldn't loose her new found lover? The story doesn't say.

This is merely a fiction piece, logic, reality had nothing whatsoever to do with it. A wife decided to network...with a bunch of filthy rich people..got lucky to find a very wealthy rich guy with a hot babe of a wife who liked to bang her. Fringe benefits of networking with rich horny people. the husband was propositioned so that they could in good conscience take her with them on their jaunts around the world...he is handsomely rewarded...as compensation for letting them screw her in various locations. Again FICTION...just like my filthy rich uncle/auntie/cousin along with that long lost inheritance i was supposed to get when i discovered that I was actually royalty...only to find my lineage is nothing but a royal pain in the ass to someone...who was rich. So, the story will continue when I motivated to expand upon the story. However if you must know...they all live happily ever after, get filthy rich, buy and island somewhere and start an open marriage counseling center. The END

Yes this was meant as an addendum to the original story. Chapt 1 is being removed...it was never supposed to be published.

I just found this series and I don't see Laurie reconecting with her husband. Maybe they stay married, but Terra will life with the husband whom she seems to really love. So why change back to the wife who doesn't love him?

You loser wimp husband . . Don't have a guts to satisfied a slut wife loser.. . .

Why are people bitching? He got the best part of the deal. All that's left is to figure out a way to get the wife's money and a foolproof way of making her disappear. Life is good!

Finish it up

I would pretty much give any story containing these elements anything between 4 and 12, out of Five Stars, dependent on how well, and innovatingly, it was written. This one though sadly, I can only rate as a 2.5*.

Most of this being attributable to the "Boy's Own Adventure Annual" (for 13 year old boys, 1959 edition) in whose inimitable style it has been lovingly re-created, as we lurch breathlessly from one jolly jape to the next, like a young adolescent Batman, and his pre-pubescent matchstick-legged sidekick, Robin!

The there were all the hiccups trying to silently read it smoothly through all the spelling, punctuation & grammatical errors. Add-in the puerile writing style, the continuity-gaps, the incredulity leaps and, Holy Hookers Batman, -we got ourselves a dud!

Sorry, I DO wish I could rate it higher. it was a valiant effort, but didn't quite survive the transhipment to the adult section of this Library.

Cheating whores goes abroad.

great but short addition. i liked it alot, solid four stwars. i do hope you add more, the couple sharing his wife with a BBC and other women also. so yummy