All Comments on 'Jay Nurses My Injury'

by Jada59

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OzBushrangerOzBushrangeralmost 6 years ago
The Best

This has to be one of the best stories I have read on this site. It is exceptionally well written, with a short introductory scene and a prolonged buildup to an explosive climax, then finishing with a short end scene. It has a natural length and I particularly like the teasing.

Great stuff. Keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Meh

There was no way I could finish this story, but I could tell a whore wrote it. Fix your comma use.

TheOnlyOneLeft4YouTheOnlyOneLeft4Youabout 5 years ago
Great Read

Very built up storyline with details...

Loved it....

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