by Jada59
This has to be one of the best stories I have read on this site. It is exceptionally well written, with a short introductory scene and a prolonged buildup to an explosive climax, then finishing with a short end scene. It has a natural length and I particularly like the teasing.
Great stuff. Keep it up.
There was no way I could finish this story, but I could tell a whore wrote it. Fix your comma use.