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by Anonymous

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by Syndra Lynn01/29/05

Brilliant!

Loved it from start to finish. Wanted to pick the best lines to spotlight here, but they are all delightful.

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by My Erotic Tale01/29/05

mentioned

Your Poem was mentioned on the thread
'New Poems Reviews'

thanks for the journey~

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by WickedEve01/30/05

laden with adjectives

but the words you chose gave this poem a lush tone.

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