All Comments on 'The Female Agent Pt. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Women rule!

I loved this setup, the payoff was wonderful with Sabrina asserting her new-found female authority over Riley!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Fabulous! Fabulous Story!

I loved it. Great job.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Girls will be girls!

... and that's good. But if girls are bold as your characters it will be really humiliating and arousing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

wish it was longer than one page

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Very promising

Your writing is coming along nicely and the characters forming over time. Real nice. I loved the dynamics played out in this one and Riley's final humiliation. Keep writing please!

spankedboyspankedboyover 5 years ago

Loved the story. Sabrina should have her own series!

Is she Muslim in this story?

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Love this story especially the Sabrina part. Are you planning a more daring photo shoot for Tom?

hassreinerhassreinerabout 5 years ago

Please continue writing! And what about a more daring photoshoot?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Punished in Chastity

It would have been great if Riley ended up locked in chastity. Always remembering that his last bit of freedom was spent in humiliation in front of them woman who now controls his manhood (or lack thereof now). He serves his new queen not only locked in chastity, but also serving as her feminized secretary.

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