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by Aunty Muse01/29/05

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Like all your poems, you need to proofread and edit them.

"kept"
"Despite of in all the"


i deducks 4 badly speiling grammer & sin tacks,

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by Amyfriend02/09/07

Praising ...

Jesus for his help..

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