All Comments on 'Barbie + Ken Ch. 02'

I got so happy when I recognized the title! Been waiting for it, loved the first chapter so much and the second doesn’t disappoint! So excited to read the whole story! You really manage to weave a great story together!. Love it!

I am in awe

So far, the best story I've ever read on this site. This is one I will read again and again. Hopefully, the next chapter will be posted soon.

More! More! More!!!

Hayden, promise you’ll finish this story. Best thing I’ve read on this site in a long time.

This is really good! Can’t wait to read the next chapter

Thank you for this story!! It is so much more than the usual sex for sex's sake. You add in so much more, Occult, religion, prophesy, legend, and an excellent use of mystery, prolonged glimpses of 'plot', and of course it is wrapped in lust, and love..

EXCELLENT WORK !!

I have to reiterate the comments of others; I can hardly wait for the next installment !

DV19

Keep writing, keep posting! Please don’t take such a long break this time! I had given up hope! I love this story! I need moreeee!!!!

PLEASE continue with writing this story. I agree with the other commenters about your blending a strong Werewolf storyline with demonic myth & prophecy.

So looking forward to the next chapters.

Damn that was a good story wish you'd come back and write more

I have to agree with everyone else here - what a fantastic story! You’re amazing amazing storyteller. In just a few chapters you’ve been able to build the beginnings of a rich, complex, and intriguing world. What a splendid (and hilariously snarky) imagination you must have. I know that it has been a long time since you’ve last posted and I certainly respect that it’s easy for life to be busy or to simply lose your muse; however, I’d also love to immerse myself in this world of yours. I can easily imagine it as a novel series. Best wishes!

Supporting everybody else's comments, would love to read the follow up. Amazing! Hope you keep writing.

Hopefully someday we’ll see a part 3.

Do I have to beg and plead for chapter 3? I'm on my knees Alpha!