All Comments on 'Bumming a Smoke'

when will james be back for more

i would suck james over and over and take his cock

The writing is better than average, I like the subject matter, and you manage handle the black/white thing without any overt racism showing through.

But the tags are wrong. There's no cuckoldry in this story.

I was scrolling down reading cuckold stories and really sad about the poor quality of the first three I read when I stumbled across this one. While this story is clearly mislabeled as a cuckold story, I, too, enjoyed the subject matter and the quality of the writing, so I gave you 4 stars. Your story reminded me of back in the day when AOL had good chat rooms, and I came across a bi chatroom. I had always been curious about sucking a cock, and since I had recently broken up with my g/f, I somehow struck up a conversation with a guy who eventually invited me to come over to his shop after hours and meet. I threw caution into the wind, drove over, and chatted with the guy. We finally got to the point where he pulled out his dick and asked if I wanted to suck it, just as in this story. I thought I was thicker than average at about 6.2 inches in circumference, but this guy's dick had to have been 7+ inches around. The next thing I knew I got on my knees and sucked that big, thick piece of fuck meat just like your main character until he shot down my throat and I swallowed every drop. Even though the dude was a bit weird, I continued meeting him periodically to suck that thick slab of meat until he finally closed his store and moved away. Likewise, I hope these two characters continue to get it on!

A great story, Wish I had a James. I am so happy he will be cumming back. I would ask him to move in with me and be my husband. I am 4yourpleasureiam Please PM me here and I will be your sissy

This one is very good. You do an excellent job of describing how Doug gradually gets a sense of his inferiority before James' great manhood. Doug realizes that he owes it to the superior man to worship him, and he cannot resist. James might have carried Doug's humiliation further. For example, he might have been required to prove he really wanted to make love to James' superior dick by first licking and kissing all over James' ass cheeks and then inhaling and cleaning out James' deep ass crack. Anyway, I hope you write some more.

Great story! Love the development of the relationship between the semi-clueless white beta male and the, at first, seemingly weak James, who is slowly revealed to be a true Alpha male. I would love to serve James and I would probably wind up with him living and sleeping in my room and me being his personal BBC cumslut and with his cock down my sissy throat or with him bending me over and fucking me hard and cumming huge loads with his big huge thick black cock buried deep in my sissy ass pussy much of the time! 😊

Great story! Excellent details and very rewarding turning of the tables in the power dynamic between Doug and James. I enjoy stories about guys like Doug, big, tough looking guys on the outside with just one little secret between their legs. Might be worth a sequel, James finding Doug around in the neighborhood and deciding to press his advantage over the lesser man. Exploit him more, empty his pockets. strip him of cash and valuables, and continue to expose and humiliate the small dick wimp.

Wow, I about came in my running short shorts while reading your story as I keep my pubic hair trimmed close and keep my balls shaved just like Doug! I have a little one and I like running in the park with my little guy at attention. I'm so small that everyone just giggles, the soccer moms can be so naughty when they are together in a big group. I always pull the liner in my running shorts to the side to reveal the outline of my little helmet. Over the course of this summer I became acquainted with the soccer moms. On one of the hotter days this August, I had finished my run and stopped by the water fountain where the soccer moms sat. I always enjoy letting them look at my little bump in my shorts and they always giggle to one another and whisper. As I was standing there, limp and soft, a guy came running up to the drinking fountain. The soccer moms suddenly went quiet, this guy was pure alpha. He worn a T-shirt and running shorts that where much longer than mine. Mine had about a one inch inseam, the type you normally see women wearing, that expose all the way to the top of my thighs. I feel so girly when I wear them, and they make me feel so comfortable, like this is really who I am inside. He ended up walking towards me and Susan, one of the soccer moms mentioned that this guy was really "stacked down there" which I then realized that I said, "OMG, he really is hung, isn't he?" Susan then told the others, "look, his little thing is getting hard" as laughter erupted from the group of ladies. Alpha guy just stood there, clearly enjoying the attention while my little one throbbed and pulse, the fact that I had pulled back the liner of my running short shorts left nothing to the imagination. God, his soft thick cock hung down one leg of his shorts...I couldn't stop looking at it. My little guy was twitching like crazy and making little wet spots in my running shorts as it throbbed and displayed my arousal, which everyone noticed. I heard the soccer moms whispering and giggling about the difference between the size of our equipment. Susan then made introductions, she was fearless and had an incredible body. Saving my introduction for last, she told him my name, then added with a sultry tone, "I see someone is very happy to meet you" and everyone cracked up laughing while Susan's finger pointed at my tented shorts, complete with wet spots. She whispered in my ear, "you are welcomed". I crave humiliation, so I stood there and let everyone look and to make the situation even more humiliating I stared at his bludge and marveled at the length and girth of his shaft. My little guy was continually dripping and wetting my shorts. The looks on the soccer moms faces, knowing that they were comparing us as well as noticing my wetness left me light headed and breathing hard. By this time I was drunk on humiliation and without thinking said to Susan, "it's just so big, I can't stop looking at it" I remembered Susan pointing out the fact that I was blushing to everyone. It was then that we all heard whistles and the sound of stampeding soccer players heading over. Alpha guy was incredibly gracious and laughed and said that surprisingly he gets that a lot from men. Since the front of my running shorts wear completely wet, Susan told me I needed to get to my car before anyone else noticed. I took her suggestion and hurried off. We, the soccer moms and I never ran across our Alpha guy again. I still run by Susan and her group, when it isn't crazy cold in the park. Though I now run in the park wearing a pair of long legged black women's yoga pants, which are surprisingly warm and are extremely clingy in the crotch, leaving nothing to the imagination. Susan and the gang joke about the Alpha guy, telling me not to worry, we keep looking for your "boyfriend" he will come back some day. They all wish men had to wear yoga pants as then there would be no guess work about the size of a man's endowment. Susan commented in front of the others, "I thought that you were going to get on your knees and give him a BJ right there!" Asking me, "you wanted to, didn't you?" She laughed and said to the others, "he's blushing again!"

I have a small cock and I can't help looking when I see an alpha male with a big cock. There is a mixture of jealousy and admiration of this superior man. I can't resist if he tells me to get on my knees and suck his cock because he is so much more man than me.

I'm a little dicklet like Doug so I whish i could have sucked and fucked James's big black cock for sure:🙂

loved this story. I am not small,but i am trans and always in a cage, being on my knees servicing a real man like Doug did is my favourite pastime.

You understand this genre authentically and portray us in honest unabridged accuracy. Hopefully you aren't finished writing, we need this constant reminder to sustain our compulsive exsistance.

And licker black masters feet and asshole too