A Brother & Sister Ch. 01-06

awesome

omg that could not have been written any better. would love to read new chapters in this series. u could have so many more chapters. please keep writing on this series :-)

Very Good

Will give you 100 after u satiate me with the rest

what about

what happened between julie and gavin

Nice

Very Nice story Nikki. Loved every bit of it.

LOVE IT, LOVE IT, LOVE IT...

WOW!!!!! What a story!!! Normally, I give 4's, because the author(s) inevitably leave something out, but you get a BIG 5, because you didn't! You covered it all! Truly erotic literature at its finest! It took me 2 days to read chapters 1 - 6, because I read them slowly to be sure I didn't miss a single word! Can't wait to read the rest! (Hell, I would've given you a 6 if I could!)

wow

omg i loved that it took me 10 hrs to read all that but it sure was good i came like 20 times all together cant wait to read the rest

OMG!!!

I seriously came like six times over two days reading this story. Thank you, Nikki, I owe you one, or six I guess ;)

NUMERO UNO

This is number one by anyones imagination loved every word of it especially the anal with olivia and Mary involved it can becum better and so will I cum!!!

Why can't movies be like this?

This story should be the script of series of erotic movies. Why can't they take the cue of developing stories, characters, and truly erotic, taboo, suspenseful encounters?

Amazing

Wow. Simply. Wow. That has got to be the best erotic story I have ever read. I notice from your profile that the adventure continues. I have to wonder if by the end, will we end up with a giant orgy between the two families? Can't wait to find out. :)

your the best

OMG that was the best i have ever read lol

Fantastic!

U the best. It is the best erotics story I've ever read.
It's truly one of a kind. Thank you for your time.

Absolutely amazing

i didn't count how often i came while reading this story. but now i have to go on and read pt 7-10

Wow! Just wow!

Incredible writing, I can't imagine how much fun you must have had writing this, but I know I probably loved reading it as much as you did writing it.

Fuck My Sister

This story is really great ! I've always wanted to fuck one of my sisters..They are both beatiful and sexy..I may get the opportunity soon..Wish me luck..P.S Would like to fuck you too.

WOW

this is one of the best incest stories i have ever read on this site. there was a slight mistake in a paragraph on page five but you can easily remedy that. keep writing stories of this calibre nikki and you cant go wrong. maybe add a bit of incest marriage or pregnancies to spice it up a bit where brother gets sister pregnant then after the baby is born the brother drinks the sisters milk. that adds a bit more to the story and in my opinion drags it out a bit more to keep the readers interested. regardless of what i say about story ideas, my overall view is that your stories are great and i hope you keep writing more incest please!!!!

damn

wow. i cant say much to that except DAMN!! i loved it! it got me so hard. i got off several times reading it. i always wanted to fuck my sis. shes just so damn hot. i get jealous every time she gets a boyfriend. we licked and sucked when we were younger but that quickly ended when she got her first boy ;) loved it. keep writing forever!!!!!

Great writing.

This is the first story I've ever read on this website (a few months ago, wasn't much for leaving comments then) and I loved it so much I read it again. Although the storyline is only good, the sex scenes are amazing. Thank you for writing this and getting me that much more interested in this website.

PLEASE

YOU HAVE TO FINISH, we all know where it is going but you have to finish, dont leave it to our imagination!

KEEP IT CUMMING!

these stories are both erotic and sensational! Don't stop with it!

SERIOUSLY

FINISHHHHH

WOW

WOW

Please finish!!!

This story it so hot and sexy, its hard to get so invested into the plotline and have it just end like this, please finish the story a.s.a.p. I would love to see what happens next and I imagine your other readers are dying to know as well.

Huge Massive a Monster Yawnnnnnnnnnn

God even if you didn't give specific measurements all you did was describe it as huge and massive god that gets so old.

A real cock teasing story

Anyone who can write something like this must be as horny and nasty as I am. I have three older sisters, but the youngest one (six years older than me), I've wanted to fuck her for years. Hopefully someday I will get the chance. In the mean time I'll read your stories and jerk off, thinking about fucking my sister, and fucking you. Thanks.

Nice

Wow, this has been good. can't wait to read the rest!

I've had sex with my sister and its fantastic

Probably the best I ever had in my life. It was her idea and we'd screw like rabbits

One of the most intresting

It real like with the brother temptation his sister to the father guilty mind it so real and unblieveable to have both cases in the same family.

I do not know if your real name is nikki but you are one of the most talented reader i have read(I read other stuff then just erotic)

Wow!!!

Samslam recommended you to me and I must say, he did not disappoint!!!! Very well written and extreamly erotic!!!! You deffinetly get five stars out of me!!

wow.

you have no idea how many times i have came reading this. it makes me feel so fucking hot. nikki - you are amazing!

Great Story

Exceptionally well written thank you nikki you are great! This is quite the wild ride, most of this especially the parts of siblings is very plausible. I love the fact not every one is as easy as Julie and Steve. Very strange that after sleeping with her brother for a few months it finally occurs to her to go on the pill lol. I'd have busted a nut in her while carving her out by mistake eventually. Keep it up your the bomb nikki

best ever

it was almost like my family except i cant seduce any lol

Love it

Just an amazing story very well written and crazy hot. Lol its stoies like this that make me wish I had siblings.

great story

Well written story from a very creative person. I wait to see if you are going to continue as there are many story lines open such as glory hole and some other with cousins.Keep up the great work.

Loved It

Hope there will be more and more!

well well

i have been a `fan` of porn for nearly twenty years but this story was the incredible! absolutely amazing!

work of art

this has to be the best thing i've read on here in my 3 weeks of exploring this site, great job nikki!

Amazing

By far the best thing I've read on here. It's propably the longest as well, but it is very well written, with 23 pages of incestuous love. Keep up the good work and the great story, nikki :)

superb job

have read lot of stories but this one is like i can read many times without geting bored.
great job nikki.

no good

way to long and it is never good to get the parents involved big zero from me

Outstanding

I will miss the reading of these adventures you are so hot. I had to stop and rub one out thinking of you. Want to adopt me ??? :-)

The climax will be when I read about mom learning she he knew it was her and Julie learning etc. May you have alread I will look for it.

Bless you Nikki

Zoneman1959@yahoo.com

chapters

very good but u should have divided iot into 6 different entries instead of one long entry

great story kept me hard the entie time

keep it up!!!

i was disappointed to find no more after 13

great story

great story,wish my sisters and cousins and aunts and uncles were like Julie. is there more to cum.
thanks

Awesome

WOW Love ur it I have read many times makes want to write some of my Fansties and some real stuff. So keep it it cumming

Thank you!

You're story made me cum 6 times in one night as the story unfolded. Made my pussy wetter than it has ever been. Thank you! And by the way, please continue it!

The Movie??

I'd love to see a real movie made of this, of course it would get banned but it would be a torrent legend!!!

Great!

This is amazing work! Keep it up!

This is amazing work! You should write your own novels but we'd miss you here.