Keep writing this story, it is never ending and so damned horny. It is tight, well written and eplorative. Well done.
If you should get the opportunity check out my work, would love your vote too.
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Anonymous12/18/05
What a story
Totally awesome. If one could only have an opportunity to participate in such an event. My compliments to the writer, excellent, and hoping some of this is not just your imagination. Keep up the good work.
You write the sort of story that reaches out through your monitor and grabs you by the balls. Exquisite.It's rare for me to give 5's but you earned it. Thanks for the story Nikki. I'm going to add you to my favourites page.
My my what a long list of sweet young cum sluts we have here. And we have a few NOT so young as well. Throw in a liberal dose of monster cocks, and you have a recipe for all out gorilla fucking. Hell fire, we even have a good share of girl on girl action as well! What with all the young entreprenurial action going as well...whew...this old man needs to stop and catch his breath here...And Mom and auntie...aren't they just precious...LOL...thinking they can get a little of Stevie boys mega-cock ANONYMOUSLY? And little Julie...Christ she just wants to fuck somethin'. And wouldn't you fucking know that some poor dolt named DAVE would have the only moral compass in town? Huh...at least until his daughter destroyed ALL of his resolve to NOT succumb to her charms. Poor fucker NEVER had a chance. What? You say the story ain't over yet? I know I've asked this before but...WHERE THE HELL IS MY NITRO? Nikki...your bio says it best...you ARE a hot (and nasty) little girl!
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Anonymous01/04/06
Amazing
This is the third time I have read the story. It keeps me HARD through every page and I cannot wait to get to the next scene. I think Nikki is one of the best writers on Literotica.
by
Anonymous01/07/06
The very best
Erotic and well written, it teases the reader and leaves you wanting more.
by
Anonymous02/04/06
Hot Julie girl.
Congratulation for your creativity. Your story is undoubtedly the best I have read at this website. There is a very good development of the relationship among the characters, one can note the beginning and the middle. I am just waiting for the end...
Best story I've read in a long time. Please post more.
by
Anonymous04/22/06
I've often dreamed...
I've been reading this story off and on for the past 6 months or so (a couple paragraphs here and there when I have the chance), and I have to say that this is an awesome story. I've often dreamed of having sexual encounters with family members, and have even fooled around with my own sister. Thanks for a great read! MD
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Anonymous04/27/06
The besssst story ever read
I have read many erotica stories and this is the best fucking story yet.
by
Anonymous04/28/06
Ready for the follow up stories!
Awesome can't wait to read more.....
by
Anonymous06/18/06
Shook my Bones
All i got to say is that its the best incest story i ever read and ive read a lot. i love how you dont just keep it bro/sis or mom/son but all of the family and some w/o knowing who each other are. also i love how you dont go into details of how many inches the cock is. when i read this i keep masturbating constantly, i couldnt get enough of it. i hop eyou follow it up with more, because it the best fucking story i read...ever! keep it cumming!
All i got to say is that its the best incest story i ever read and ive read a lot. i love how you dont just keep it bro/sis or mom/son but all of the family and some w/o knowing who each other are. also i love how you dont go into details of how many inches the cock is. when i read this i keep masturbating constantly, i couldnt get enough of it. i hop eyou follow it up with more, because it the best fucking story i read...ever! keep it cumming!
by
Anonymous06/27/06
AWSOME
Absolutely fabulous!
Reading your story hase made me wondering a bit about my 17 y.o. daughter (and 18 y.o. son). Would they also....?
My daughter loves fucking her friend. I know, I've heard her scream one night...
Please continue. You still have a long way to go to get all possible combinations of this family. So you'll have to end in with absolute stunning groupsexparty.
Please get Julie on the pill a.s.a.p. and let all men fill this greedy slut's ass and cunt with their sperm.
Another wish: also some sex between men. I know many men secretly think about that. Or not so secretly. I for one have a couple of times sucked a friends dick till he came in my mouth. I loved the taste and smell of dick and the feelimg of cum spurting into my mouth!
Not shocked are you?
by
Anonymous07/24/06
Simply the best
The hottest story I have ever read. Hot action, great build up, and so well written.
by
Anonymous08/04/06
A Brother & Sister Ch. 01-06 and 07-23
This is without doubt the best story I have ever read on this topic.It is well crafted and scripted, the story line develops at a carefully-slow pace, and the breadth of its content is awesome. It must have taken a month of creative effort to write it all, and you should be congratulated for sticking with it to the end (if this is the end? -- might ther be a "final chapter still unwritten?) Thank you.
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Anonymous08/14/06
GOD!!!! THIS IS REALLY GOOD
i've read this story and it's just fucking awesome, man i couldn't stop reading it for hours, all the weekend, man this is the best story i've read so far, i masturbated a lot of times reading today i spent all day in it
this was absolutely fantastic i have come several times reading this.....please please please you have to continue the story, i'm going to be so horny for the rest of the day now my panties are soaking wet.i just love talking horny sex online with someone it is such a turn on.
this was absolutely fantastic i have come several times reading this.....please please please you have to continue the story, i'm going to be so horny for the rest of the day now my panties are soaking wet.i just love talking horny sex online with someone it is such a turn on.
heheheheeh just seen david48 from texas's response to this story what a hoot, you have the right idea there hun.
by
Anonymous11/28/06
TOO HOT FOR WORDS
HOT!!! PLEASE DON'T LEAVE ME WAITING!!! I NEED MORE!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!
by
Anonymous12/04/06
Incredible
It took me days to read all the way but I came at least 40 times while reading it!! It was incredible!!
by
Anonymous12/31/06
!
you are the Shakespeare of erotic literature my friend.
You are my inspiration Nikki. I love all your incest stories, but this one is a fucking epic! Keep them coming.
by
Anonymous03/27/07
Nice!
I loved how you had such a variety on the aspects of sex. You could work on a little though.
by
Anonymous04/18/07
Ohhhh. I'm Dizzy.
Nikki, your wtiting is so hot I am actually dizzy from readingit. Keep up this terrific storyRjay.
by
Anonymous06/25/07
AMAZING
I thought this was an incredible story, I have already read 1-10 once, and im reading it again now. I would love to hear some side stories maybe!! :D Once again, Awesome!!!
not only did i love the story but your writing is so amazing u should write erotic novles and see if you can get them published cuz i would pay to read material of this exlience. Unbaliebably well written, i had the biggest oragasm ive ever had reading this story, thank you so much....... =)
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Anonymous07/28/07
Very erotic.
This is a great, er, novel (I guess it can be called that) lol. Had me cumming a few times, maybe you should take it futher, write more like erotic fiction and puslish it?
I wish you were my niece, or daughter, or my sister, or my fuck buddy. That was really good writing and story line. Keep up the great work, and I'll keep reading. You had me hard and "wanking" quite a bit while reading your story. Thank You!
by
Anonymous08/04/07
Hot, I'm on fire
Nikki that story was so hot, i kept imagining I was steve, I was stroking my dick reading every hot word. I don't know how many times I came, yummy
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Anonymous08/12/07
WOW WOW WOW
It is a very long time since I have read a story like that - I jhave spent a whole afternoon reading it and have had more than a few masturbations whilst doing so - unfortunately I didnt have a male around to help me out - but I will next time I read it - and I will read it again
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Anonymous08/29/07
wow
Amazing
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Anonymous10/09/07
FUCK ME NOW!!!!!!
OMG LOVED THIS STORY SO MUCH I WISH I WAS A GUY NOW AND WANK MYSELF!!!! THIS STORY MADE ME SO HORNEY!! I JUST DIDNT LIKE THE ENDING IT WAS KINDA LAME SRRY BUT SOME PARTS OF THE STORY I JUST WANTED TO SCREEM OUT LOUD FROM MY ORGASIIM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :-P
KYLA
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Anonymous10/23/07
I want more
I've never read anything like this- My cock was so hard while reading, I just had to go and take care of it, thinking about Steve pounding his Mothers ass, and fucking Julie's mouth.
Please don't leave this line alone- keep writing!
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Anonymous10/30/07
Excellent Detail
Wow! So much material to jack off to. My cock is hard and I'm stroking it as I write with my left hand. You really gave me a great hardon. I've downloaded this to my favorites so I can masturbate to it again and again. It feels so good. Thanks. You are wonderful.
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Anonymous12/02/07
Legendary !
I liked almost everything about the story. I simply can't remember reading such an interesting story, much less one which was so well written.
My only worry is .... it hasn't REALLY ended .... has it ? There IS more to come ?
I am so hoping to read what happens when Mum finally admits etc.
It's a truly legendary piece of erotica.
PS: I think I fell in lust with the authoress somewhere along the way as well :-)
It has taken me a few hours to read through this story - WOW - I think the only thing that would have improved it would have been to make each incident a separate chapter - instead of just ongoing - otherwise a really great tale - keep writing -
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Anonymous12/24/07
Loved the oral bits
Loved the girls sucking Steve's cock when he pulled out before putting it back in to fuck some more or to switch to the other, taking his cum in their mouth (and kissing to share it!), eating his cum from the other's pussy, as well as all the kissing to taste pussy on each other's lips. Just all the FFM bits. Keep writing -- your stories are the best I've EVER read!
by
Anonymous01/16/08
"wow"
this is one the best story's i have read in a long time. this was definatly a turn on
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Anonymous01/19/08
Oh my God !!!
I just hope the story ísn´t finished. As far as I´m concerned, it can go on for at least another hundred chapters. I hope I don´t have to wait long for the next series of chapters, Thanks, this was awsom.
by
Anonymous01/19/08
Very Creative
Just literally creative & imaginative,awesome storyline n don't forget very sexyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!
WOW what a story,continue please.
ONLY break it up
by
Anonymous03/11/08
more chapter's please
Keep Going with the story until the whole family is involved in a gang bang +.
by
Anonymous03/12/08
Second time I have read the story.
Read it last year for the first time. Still as sexually exciting as the first time and I have mastabated quite a few times as I read it, it is that erotic. Let's eventually have the whole family in a family gang bang.
English
Outstanding
Keep writing this story, it is never ending and so damned horny. It is tight, well written and eplorative. Well done.
If you should get the opportunity check out my work, would love your vote too.
What a story
Totally awesome. If one could only have an opportunity to participate in such an event. My compliments to the writer, excellent, and hoping some of this is not just your imagination. Keep up the good work.
Brilliant, simply brilliant.
You write the sort of story that reaches out through your monitor and grabs you by the balls. Exquisite.It's rare for me to give 5's but you earned it. Thanks for the story Nikki. I'm going to add you to my favourites page.
What a list of lavicious longings
My my what a long list of sweet young cum sluts we have here. And we have a few NOT so young as well. Throw in a liberal dose of monster cocks, and you have a recipe for all out gorilla fucking. Hell fire, we even have a good share of girl on girl action as well! What with all the young entreprenurial action going as well...whew...this old man needs to stop and catch his breath here...And Mom and auntie...aren't they just precious...LOL...thinking they can get a little of Stevie boys mega-cock ANONYMOUSLY? And little Julie...Christ she just wants to fuck somethin'. And wouldn't you fucking know that some poor dolt named DAVE would have the only moral compass in town? Huh...at least until his daughter destroyed ALL of his resolve to NOT succumb to her charms. Poor fucker NEVER had a chance. What? You say the story ain't over yet? I know I've asked this before but...WHERE THE HELL IS MY NITRO? Nikki...your bio says it best...you ARE a hot (and nasty) little girl!
Amazing
This is the third time I have read the story. It keeps me HARD through every page and I cannot wait to get to the next scene. I think Nikki is one of the best writers on Literotica.
The very best
Erotic and well written, it teases the reader and leaves you wanting more.
Hot Julie girl.
Congratulation for your creativity. Your story is undoubtedly the best I have read at this website. There is a very good development of the relationship among the characters, one can note the beginning and the middle. I am just waiting for the end...
Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
Hot Julie girl
all i can say is wow
Thanks
Best story I've read in a long time. Please post more.
I've often dreamed...
I've been reading this story off and on for the past 6 months or so (a couple paragraphs here and there when I have the chance), and I have to say that this is an awesome story. I've often dreamed of having sexual encounters with family members, and have even fooled around with my own sister. Thanks for a great read! MD
The besssst story ever read
I have read many erotica stories and this is the best fucking story yet.
Ready for the follow up stories!
Awesome can't wait to read more.....
Shook my Bones
All i got to say is that its the best incest story i ever read and ive read a lot. i love how you dont just keep it bro/sis or mom/son but all of the family and some w/o knowing who each other are. also i love how you dont go into details of how many inches the cock is. when i read this i keep masturbating constantly, i couldnt get enough of it. i hop eyou follow it up with more, because it the best fucking story i read...ever! keep it cumming!
Fucking FAbulous!
All i got to say is that its the best incest story i ever read and ive read a lot. i love how you dont just keep it bro/sis or mom/son but all of the family and some w/o knowing who each other are. also i love how you dont go into details of how many inches the cock is. when i read this i keep masturbating constantly, i couldnt get enough of it. i hop eyou follow it up with more, because it the best fucking story i read...ever! keep it cumming!
AWSOME
Absolutely fabulous!
Reading your story hase made me wondering a bit about my 17 y.o. daughter (and 18 y.o. son). Would they also....?
My daughter loves fucking her friend. I know, I've heard her scream one night...
Please continue. You still have a long way to go to get all possible combinations of this family. So you'll have to end in with absolute stunning groupsexparty.
Please get Julie on the pill a.s.a.p. and let all men fill this greedy slut's ass and cunt with their sperm.
Another wish: also some sex between men. I know many men secretly think about that. Or not so secretly. I for one have a couple of times sucked a friends dick till he came in my mouth. I loved the taste and smell of dick and the feelimg of cum spurting into my mouth!
Not shocked are you?
Simply the best
The hottest story I have ever read. Hot action, great build up, and so well written.
A Brother & Sister Ch. 01-06 and 07-23
This is without doubt the best story I have ever read on this topic.It is well crafted and scripted, the story line develops at a carefully-slow pace, and the breadth of its content is awesome. It must have taken a month of creative effort to write it all, and you should be congratulated for sticking with it to the end (if this is the end? -- might ther be a "final chapter still unwritten?) Thank you.
GOD!!!! THIS IS REALLY GOOD
i've read this story and it's just fucking awesome, man i couldn't stop reading it for hours, all the weekend, man this is the best story i've read so far, i masturbated a lot of times reading today i spent all day in it
ohhhhh myy goddd
this was absolutely fantastic i have come several times reading this.....please please please you have to continue the story, i'm going to be so horny for the rest of the day now my panties are soaking wet.i just love talking horny sex online with someone it is such a turn on.
ohhhhh myy goddd
this was absolutely fantastic i have come several times reading this.....please please please you have to continue the story, i'm going to be so horny for the rest of the day now my panties are soaking wet.i just love talking horny sex online with someone it is such a turn on.
heheheheeh just seen david48 from texas's response to this story what a hoot, you have the right idea there hun.
TOO HOT FOR WORDS
HOT!!! PLEASE DON'T LEAVE ME WAITING!!! I NEED MORE!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!
Incredible
It took me days to read all the way but I came at least 40 times while reading it!! It was incredible!!
!
you are the Shakespeare of erotic literature my friend.
Fucking Fantastic!
You are my inspiration Nikki. I love all your incest stories, but this one is a fucking epic! Keep them coming.
Nice!
I loved how you had such a variety on the aspects of sex. You could work on a little though.
Ohhhh. I'm Dizzy.
Nikki, your wtiting is so hot I am actually dizzy from readingit. Keep up this terrific storyRjay.
AMAZING
I thought this was an incredible story, I have already read 1-10 once, and im reading it again now. I would love to hear some side stories maybe!! :D Once again, Awesome!!!
fucking awsome
fucking awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Only a great writer
not only did i love the story but your writing is so amazing u should write erotic novles and see if you can get them published cuz i would pay to read material of this exlience. Unbaliebably well written, i had the biggest oragasm ive ever had reading this story, thank you so much....... =)
Very erotic.
This is a great, er, novel (I guess it can be called that) lol. Had me cumming a few times, maybe you should take it futher, write more like erotic fiction and puslish it?
Peace
Daddy Cool.
WOW
I wish you were my niece, or daughter, or my sister, or my fuck buddy. That was really good writing and story line. Keep up the great work, and I'll keep reading. You had me hard and "wanking" quite a bit while reading your story. Thank You!
Hot, I'm on fire
Nikki that story was so hot, i kept imagining I was steve, I was stroking my dick reading every hot word. I don't know how many times I came, yummy
WOW WOW WOW
It is a very long time since I have read a story like that - I jhave spent a whole afternoon reading it and have had more than a few masturbations whilst doing so - unfortunately I didnt have a male around to help me out - but I will next time I read it - and I will read it again
wow
Amazing
FUCK ME NOW!!!!!!
OMG LOVED THIS STORY SO MUCH I WISH I WAS A GUY NOW AND WANK MYSELF!!!! THIS STORY MADE ME SO HORNEY!! I JUST DIDNT LIKE THE ENDING IT WAS KINDA LAME SRRY BUT SOME PARTS OF THE STORY I JUST WANTED TO SCREEM OUT LOUD FROM MY ORGASIIM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :-P
KYLA
I want more
I've never read anything like this- My cock was so hard while reading, I just had to go and take care of it, thinking about Steve pounding his Mothers ass, and fucking Julie's mouth.
Please don't leave this line alone- keep writing!
Excellent Detail
Wow! So much material to jack off to. My cock is hard and I'm stroking it as I write with my left hand. You really gave me a great hardon. I've downloaded this to my favorites so I can masturbate to it again and again. It feels so good. Thanks. You are wonderful.
Legendary !
I liked almost everything about the story. I simply can't remember reading such an interesting story, much less one which was so well written.
My only worry is .... it hasn't REALLY ended .... has it ? There IS more to come ?
I am so hoping to read what happens when Mum finally admits etc.
It's a truly legendary piece of erotica.
PS: I think I fell in lust with the authoress somewhere along the way as well :-)
Great story
It has taken me a few hours to read through this story - WOW - I think the only thing that would have improved it would have been to make each incident a separate chapter - instead of just ongoing - otherwise a really great tale - keep writing -
Loved the oral bits
Loved the girls sucking Steve's cock when he pulled out before putting it back in to fuck some more or to switch to the other, taking his cum in their mouth (and kissing to share it!), eating his cum from the other's pussy, as well as all the kissing to taste pussy on each other's lips. Just all the FFM bits. Keep writing -- your stories are the best I've EVER read!
"wow"
this is one the best story's i have read in a long time. this was definatly a turn on
Oh my God !!!
I just hope the story ísn´t finished. As far as I´m concerned, it can go on for at least another hundred chapters. I hope I don´t have to wait long for the next series of chapters, Thanks, this was awsom.
Very Creative
Just literally creative & imaginative,awesome storyline n don't forget very sexyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!
Incredible
This is incredible, had me cumming twice already... One of the best written stories I've come across on here.
Most Excellent
Thank you. Very, very good.
GREAT STORY
WOW what a story,continue please.
ONLY break it up
more chapter's please
Keep Going with the story until the whole family is involved in a gang bang +.
Second time I have read the story.
Read it last year for the first time. Still as sexually exciting as the first time and I have mastabated quite a few times as I read it, it is that erotic. Let's eventually have the whole family in a family gang bang.
oh my god
I loved this story it took a a few days to read the whole thing and i got wet every time i read it. I wish i had a brother like that.
wonderful
absolutely amazing no parallel
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