A Brother & Sister Ch. 01-06

Died and gone to heaven

One hell of a story!
Have I died and gone to heaven? I dunno, but you just keep amazing me, I'll post more on the other chapters, favorited and 5 stars!

Some Details on Steve

Describe Steve, height, weight. Perhaps have a episode of Adrain, Alex, and Julie shaving Steve's "bikini line"

great!!!! One of the best

One of the best I've ever read.

Great story but I'm left feeling a little incomplete with the ending

That was absolutely brilliant

MOREEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!

more more more

i love this story,cant wait to read the rest.

OOOO YA!!!!

I was cuming the whole time I want more

Love This Story

Wow, that is the hottest thing I've ever read. I can hardly wait to read more.

Excellent story

This is a great story and the only thing that would make it better would be to have a bit more detailed descriptions of the bodies and a bit slower build up to the various acts.

Great Work more details would make it even better

An example of how this part could have more detail:

Steve fast forwarded the tape up to the point where his sister entered the room and then began stroking himself in earnest as she removed her pajamas to display her body. He kept pausing it every time there was a good view of her breasts. He could barely wait to see her pussy. When she finally dropped her pajama bottoms she turned and he only got a quick glimpse. He did see enough that she was not fully shaved like his Mom. Then, as she turned back toward the camera again, he got a good look. Her puffy mound was covered with wisps of dark blonde hair at the top and not much lower down. The hair seemed to be completely absent lower down but he could not see all that much pink below. Like with some pussies hers was less vertical and more horizontal and hard to see when she was standing up straight. He hoped for a better angle of view sometime later. His cock was rigid and hard as steel at this point. He couldn't wait for a chance to watch this on the big TV. With just another stroke he came hard again - squirting all over the bathroom wall. He carefully wiped the wall clean and put the camera away, having to get ready for uni. All day he found himself comparing the girls to his sister and Mom, wondering if any of them shaved, or how pert their breasts were when released from a confining bra.

I'm so horny!!!!!

I'm in awe if this story! I was achingly aroused tge whole time reading it. I hope to read more on this story!!i love love love it!!!

So Damn Kinky!

This story had me on edge the whole time its so damn arousing man, you make me want to take a peek at my own folks, but its better off as a fantasy as sexy, smutty, wet undies ready to explode fantasy but a fantasy no-the-less, keep writing cause damn that was hot!

Holy shit this is awesome

This story is so damned hot, it lasted me for a couple of days and I lost count how many times I came reading this all the way through! I can't wait to read chapters 7-11! My favorite part started as Steve and Julie, but Julie and her cousin comes in at a close second! I want to see how the relationship between the two cousins develops, and find out what happens now that Steve knows who hornylady is...honestly, the bits of Julie and her dad/uncle and the bits with the mom and aunt together weren't as hot, but it just added to the feeling of a coming climax where all the incest comes together as everyone's secrets are revealed and both families have a giant orgy...I don't know, but like I said, I can't wait to read the rest of this story, it was absolutely amazing and I'd give it six stars if I could. This is the first time a story has ever been so good that I commented on it, and I'd favorite it if I had an account!

Love your incest srtory

I used to play with my sister's pussy and she let me eat her a couple of times. She would give me handjobs and once in a while suck me off too. This story brings back some fond feelings.
Loved the girl-on-girl parts, and the older guy with younger girl, and the Mother-Aunt-Son trio.
Looking forward to the family finding out that Steve and Julie started the whole thing, and they are going to control everyone else.

Fantastic story, I couldn't stop reading

Very sexy story and so well told. I never had a sister, but I'm sure I would have been sniffing her panties and trying to see her naked. Maybe she'd have felt the same . . . heaven on earth!

Best on the site

No long entry here. I've been using this site for awhile now and when other stories fail to please me, this story fulfills every time.

i have read a lot of porn and this is in the top 3.

wow

Unbelievable, the first story for what I needed more than a week to read. ..
You did a good joob :-)

Bravo!

A great piece of creative writing I loved it and will add you as my first favorite author. I particularly liked the way that you dealt with the cognitive dissonance of the relations!
Singe aka summore or summ3 on this site

Incredible!

I loved how intricate and well thought out the plot is. Plus it's got a little of everything, brother/sister, sister/sister, father/daughter, mother/son. There's definitely something for everyone in this gem. Totally favoriting this author and story. Looking forward to reading more from this author.

DAMN

What a story!!!! This has it all, And it is so well written you definitely know how to write a story babygirl

Too damn long and don't even bother part 2. only food shelter shitheads can try finish part 1

Way way way tooooooooo looooong-

God what a waste -you should have stopped after a few pages. Didn't writing this get awfully boring? Reading this cranked out garbage was impossible- I scanned the story after the fifth page- just unreadable after a while. You need to find another hobby

Sexxxxxxxxxy

Can't hardly wait for part two to be written

I want more

Loved the story, very well written. It had a little bit of everything and there was attention to detail - I love it. But it can't end here?! The story must go on, I need to know what happens next. I'm anticipating a part 2 to this story!

Loved It

This is such a good story, It's a gift that keeps on giving. AND TO ALL THE PEOPLE SAYING IT'S TOO LONG, THERE IS SUCH A THING AS LEAVING IT AND THEN COMING BACK LATER TO FINISH READING IT, DUH, NOT ROCKET SCIENCE, other than that, yeah, possible my favourite all time.

FAMILY FUCKFEST !

Love reading this story, read some parts, cum, then come back pick up where I left of and cum again. I can't wait to see if the two families wind up in one big FUCKFEAST !

good

Good story found myself going to libary to get all pages damn nikki what have u done to me lmaol

Super very good

This is one of the best story's yet, one thing I want is the whole family get together with everybody there, I day dream about this and would love to have been Steve. A threesome is my dream but I can say keep up the good writing and give more of A Brother & Sister story.

I've been wanking myself silly from page one.
A really great story

LONG AND SEXUAL READING STORY

What a family of five star fuckers and suckers

great job nikki

Great jobs nikki I started reading this at work and got a huge cock stand what happened next is another story

Hot

Im on the bus reading page 10 and i have the biggest hard on very noticeable you have a way with words keep writing ^_^

The Best

Nikki, you're the best

What an amazing tory

A few errors of names, but the story is awesome. My cock was hard on every page.

Great Story

So glad another writer referred Nikki .. 'cus this was an awesome story producing many hard ons. I'm a little sore, but well worth it.
Look forward to more...
Thx Nikki

wow

I was literally dripping wet after reading this. You have a talent for sure

hornylady

I was dripping wet when reading this and I must have came half a hundred tmes at least ;) Nikki you are the best!

Just incredible

Wonderful. You have a talent at writing.

I love it!!

keep it up. you definitely have a talent.

Excellent

What a talent, you r a very good writer, I was waiting for the part when Steve will tell his mom, that he knows, and hoping for Steve, Julie and Olivia threesome