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Typical Tony
Once again, you have demonstrated your expertise in the field of Romance writing! A wonderful story, typical of all your other works. I anxiously await the next tale!
Bob from Bellevue
Loved it!
Great emotional elements to convey the anticipation, yearning and apprehension which comes with being apart. The lovers' eventual reunion and resulting happy ending were also a nice added touch.
Amazing, as always - Love the native american!
Your honest and open portrayal is a joy and a delight. I trust you will continue exploring this realm, the research you've done is evident without it being 'overly' evident. Subtle and wonderous
I loved the story, but was a little confused.
I know that some of the Shawnee sojourned for a time in Eastern Kansas, after being forced out of their homeland. I could see this group perhaps being attacked by the Pawnee. But, I find it difficult to believe that they would have ranged all of the way to Ohio or even Indiana to attack the Shawnee. I did, however, enjoy the story, as I have enjoyed all of your stories that I have read. I consider you to be one of the best authors on this site.
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