All Comments on 'Under Construction Ch. 03'

Well that was amazing!! Please write more in this series, it has even more potential!

the extremely crude language at end jarred me. He did say it would be degrading sex etc. but still seemed out of character with his persona and I would think is a turn-off. Control vs crudeness. Just a thought as I look forward to more chapters but hope it does not devolve into grotesque crudeness or cruelty.

Just great!

I enjoyed every second of it and can't wait for the next chapter.

It was intensly hot.

The sub inside me is really liking Darren's rawness. I can see the appeal Shawna see's in him.

Josie