All Comments on 'The Guilty Party'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Aw

That's sweet...I'd help them out so they could always be together...I'd give her a fucking divorce.

tazz317tazz317over 12 years ago
GUILT BY REASON OF HORNINESS

and wishing to be so for a long time together. TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Seems

This story may show some promise, although it seems to have been rushed. Maybe the author could take more time to develop the plot and dialog more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
not well thought out

and his wife jumping on the other guy

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