That's sweet...I'd help them out so they could always be together...I'd give her a fucking divorce.
and wishing to be so for a long time together. TK U MLJ LV NV
This story may show some promise, although it seems to have been rushed. Maybe the author could take more time to develop the plot and dialog more.
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That's sweet...I'd help them out so they could always be together...I'd give her a fucking divorce.
GUILT BY REASON OF HORNINESS
and wishing to be so for a long time together. TK U MLJ LV NV
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This story may show some promise, although it seems to have been rushed. Maybe the author could take more time to develop the plot and dialog more.
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