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by Anonymous02/02/05

God Damn ronnie

You've brought back the memories of my youth. My mature lady was 33 years old when I was 19. She was a chief gunners mate's wife in San Diego Ca. in 1959.

I think I was making 85 dollars a month. My "scivvie house" experiences were in Tijuana. first time I fucked Marlene, her old man was passed out in the bedroom from Bulldog malt liquor. He had brought me home from the ship where he was chief master at arms and in charge of the mess cooks of which i had been assigned for 6 weeks. He thought he would get some free labor at his house for a meal or two.


The first time I fucked her was unintentional by me but not by Marlene. It was also with a rubber. She told me that if we were going to go to bed with each other, then i was going to have to be her steady boyfriend, stay out of TJ or use rubbers. I hated rubbers. After three more weekends of visits and she knew that all my off duty time was spent with her, and not in Mexico, and that i was clean, I started to fuck her bareback.

She would do anything but anal. Said she had the piles.

Old Sparky, her husband, never suspected a thing. I think she was neglected by him something fierce. I was not the first sailor he had brought home to "do his yard chores" and probably wasn't the last.

I kept this up for about four months and fucked her on off duty weekends when I went home with Sparky. (we had port and starboard liberty) so every other weekend was off duty.

I volunteered for UDT and was accepted to a school and was transferred. I saw Sparky in a bar about a year later in Yokosuka Japan before I volunteered for Vietnam. He said he and Marlene had a little girl since the last time I saw them.

Needless to say when he showed me a picture of her, she looked like her mom. There was though, a little bit of the child that looked like my mom when she was a child. I've always wondered. some weekends when old Sparky was drunk, she'd go to bed with him and after she was sure he was passed out, she would end up coming and staying the rest of the night with me. You know what they say about putting a load in a woman before they take a piss in the morning. lol

Thanks for the story.

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by cookiejar02/04/05

:)

A truly fantastic story Ronnie. The amount of detail you put in it was amazing. I think you better get back to the keyboard sailor. I just found another author to put on my favorites' list.

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by Anonymous02/05/05

Nothing sells like authencity

Well done, sailor. Obviously a Navy
man who got a good education.

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by Jay_Lloyd05/26/05

The best port in a storm

Excellent story, combining just the right 'smack' of reality with hot, earthy sex. My compliments.

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by Executive Gent06/10/05

Wow!!!

Great Story...loved it, all of us need a lady like her in our lives. Well done...

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Yes we do...

Yes we purrrrrr...
Great story!!!! Kinda makes me purrrr!! DC

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by sack10/30/05

just super...

These short stories by R.W. are very hot!

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by Spykke02/09/06

My kind of story

Nice tempo with that bitter-sweet ending. Bravo

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by jenellesl11/28/16

A marvelous class

I had the pleasure to meet someone like her. Fortunately I had the sense to pay attention to the teacher, a hooker in Jamaica. This is a well told tale. Do continue to write. Bravo Zulu and thanks for bringing back some wonderful memories.

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