All Comments on 'Going to Prom with My Crush'

Rob’s an asshole, but Scott got what he deserved. I have no respect for such a weak male.

In your dreams. I would have told the bitch to go to hell.

I would prefer the ending be that this young lady and her prom date are horrifically killed in a fiery crash in the limo on the way to prom. Please make those changes and I'll up my rating.

My crush's bf is Shrimpy?? She is almost oblivious to what's she's doing to him....but I am seeing it from both sides and I love it!! I suggest further refinements, knowing she will make Shrimpy a total cuck.....more humiliation ensues....I hope!! Write on Ana!!

and, you author, need a brain transplant.

what a cunt..

You must have cut the story short, because the only thing that logically could qualify as a happy ending is telling her to go to hell.

For those that wanted to know without having to read it.

Ok, you hate men. I get that. But this story was so one sided that I couldn't scrape together one bit of sympathy for the protagonist. And her "boyfriend" was such a wimp that if he had committed suicide in the second paragraph it wouldn't made much difference.

For a plot to work there has to be a plot! There needs to he tension or SOMETHING to make me identify with a character or wonder what's going to happen. Your story didn't ever change direction. It started out going downhill and just kept on until it stopped. The story setup told everything I needed to know about the entire story.

So I went back and skimmed your other work. It confirmed three things:

1. You are incapable of producing a plot.

2. You truly hate men.

3. You agree with my theory of life that women are whores by nature. It has taken me 60plus years to come to that conclusion. Congratulations, it has taken you less than half the time.

Good job

Just another slut and her wimp pussy story LOL

Gal u made me laugh my ass off. You should grab Scott's head in both hands bite your lower lip and fuck his stupid face dizzy. Put yo hips n yo back in it. Show no mercy and cut him no kinda slack

I cant stop laughing. Gon read all yo shit. Damn Gal. U sick but u rock

This sucks worse then any other story on here. I'd give you a -10 if I could. She deserves Scott to off the two of them in a slow and painful way. You have some serious issues and if you pull this on anyone I hope they give you what's coming to you and teach your crazy self a HUGE lesson.

Damn wierd, a future cuck-well on his way to full cuck status.

Stick it up your fucking ass hole

Everyone in the story deserves a very painful death. Anybody who has partook in such events in real life deserves a very painful death. Anybody who thinks that any of these characters is a good person or not deserving of a very painful death, deserves a very painful death.

Scott is just perfect cuck material, all and all It's a good story I feel like it would be better if it was from Ron's point of view, maybe that's not the authors thing but still very nice story

This bitch is EVIL!!!!!

This is more of a cuckold story with a dash of a first time for good measure. It’s not very believable that this is the girls first time, the cuckold undertones would have been better with an acknowledgement they had sex or a more drawn out scenario as it felt rushed.

Curious to see what happens next

Rob signing Scott's name was forgery. Perhaps Scott should contest the charge. He should definitely dump the bitch!

Terrific! I enjoy cuckold, slut wife/girlfriend literotica. In this story I enjoyed the young woman's POV and her seeming blindness to her boyfriend--"seeming" because, as the story proceeds, she reveals her opinions about Scott's general style as well as his penis size, his sexual experience and sexual style. In short, she knows what she's doing and is exploring how far she can push her relationship with Scott AND how far she can push herself (a "not skinny girl") by seducing a boy she considers more sexually desirable than herself. I'd enjoy seeing a story about/told by the narrator as she matures. Thanks!

Writer lives in a fantasy land as no one would pay for someone else to take their girl like this , just not believable . 👎

What the fuck...

I cant possibly believe there's people like this

Do the world a favor - never write another story, and seek professional help.