All Comments on 'Hop Aboard the O Train'

Makes me want to take the train! Wonderful tale and masterfully told, as always. You’re the best!

This was just lovely. The pacing of the first part on the train built up a nice anticipation with a sweet payoff that didn’t turn crude or predictable. And of course the second part is begging for a (happy) ending. Well... I’d be begging... Lovely.

Good. If you'd ended it when she left the train at 10:50 it would have been excellent. After that, take it or leave it.

Good to hear from you again John! And this was delish as always .. xx

I spend lots of time on the train as one way is 90 minutes and oh what I could be doing the rides going to be very different 2 morrow only if u were on board

Thinking of you during my morning commute always brings a smile to my lips. 💋