All Comments on 'Awakening Thirsts'

Happy to see you received an E.

Lots of great phrases in this one.

But I must admit that I don't like disemboweled--no matter how it's used. I'm a squeamish person with a list of icky words I don't like in poems. lol

Your poem was mentioned in Monday's New Poems Reviews thread.

Awesome job! Great imaginary, and word choice. I most definitely enjoyed :)

......enjoy BDSM grounded poetry but this one brings out the sensuality and erotica. Beautifully written and I agree with the "E".

.........don't usually enjoy or even read BDSM grounded poetry but I'm glad I read this one. It brings out the sensuality and erotica. I agree with the "E" too.

(I already commented but it didn't seem to get through so I hope this isn't a repeat. hic!)

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 36,000 poems.

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love your use of language