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Hot !!!!!
I liked this story. A lot. I've been following the whole series and liked it. Keep writing, okay ? I enjoy your stuff. You're one of the better writers at Literotica. Good stuff, pal !
So Anal
Plese, don't ruin a god story with anal sex!
vargas111@yahoo.com
Shit - hole
Who'd ever stick their tongue in there?!! Dung-pushing is so gross, such a spoiler.
Stan AAA (Anti-Anal Association)
AAA
here's another one for you limey. A-nother A-nal A-sshole. Which is what you are dipshit! And you can shove that one up your childish ass!
nice story
Who the fuck do you think you are jackass?? calling somebody an asshole cuz of the story they wrote... do you not relize that some ppl are in to anal? guess not your to fucking stupid!! its his fucking story so shut the fuck up!!!
great story
Wasn't so hot about the anal licking, but fudge packing is perfectly fine by me, *ass*pecially with two awesome hotties, anyone insecure enough to call you an asshole for having different quirks really shouldn't be reading anything but the bible...
BTW, i like the use of more dialogue in this one, look foreward to seeing if you go farther alongthis track
Keep them cumming!!!
Crazy People
I liked your story good and fine but when i got to the comment i was pretty amazed that someone was actually bashing someone else's story... I've frequented this site quite abit over the years and never have i seen anyone being bashed for what they wrote... and there's some messed up stuff on here =D But to each his/her own i say and fuck those that don't like it. keep Writing cause it's good =D
again
again keep track of your story first you say the girls are in the spare bed room then kelly is tying sandra to her brothers bed but the girls never left the spare room stop confusing things and keep track of things
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