by konstant
Oh Yes !!!
Her clarity and confidence are so alluring...
Lucky man, Very Lucky
I loved it. : ) 5 stars
I can't wait to read your next chapter.
Her terms are crystal clear and Im enjoying to read this type of story from the man's point of view.
David feels raw and I can feel his emotional tention.
Josie
Excellent chapter. You have captured her frame of mind through David's eyes and his tension, erotic and fearful, on meeting her. You've drawn the reader deep into his experience.
And in regards to my comment on Chapter 1: that should have been "nuances" instead of "nuisances." Looking forward to more of your work.