All Comments on 'In Which an Elven Servant... Ch. 09'

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TalonDCTalonDCalmost 6 years ago
Very nice

I'm really enjoying this series. Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
About bloody time....

That guy has a will of DIAMOND. Between a pretty elf and a lusty succubus-FINALLY something.

GrantLeeStoneGrantLeeStonealmost 6 years ago
Hot and romantic!

Nicely done. Is there a way for humans to get elves pregnant? Even a magical way? What if that magical way involved making a deal with a demon, maybe even a succubus? What if Master is in LOVE with Lorelei but needs Lucy’s help to get her pregnant? And maybe, by Elven Law, he can’t marry her unless he can get Lorelei pregnant! OK, I’m spitballing. And I may have taken this story in a whole other direction. But I enjoyed the romantic connection between Elf and Master in this episode.

ContrahentContrahentover 3 years ago

This chapter is just absurdly hot. This story is an excellent and original take on the cuckquean fetish. Well done.

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