All Comments on 'Languid Lovers'

Nice erotic story, you can feel the emotion the hotness and the sexiness of the enclounter.

Very hot story. I would have loved to be a fly on the wall in the room where this happened. ;)

This is truly the best in first person erotica, you could tell the writer was completely into her words, and that's erotic in turn.

OH Kitten!!! What a story!! Loved wvery word of it! You did an excellent job! Post more please!!

Loved the ending. Your comments about a man's cum on you were superb. Ruff.

I'm into reading and writing stories that have real characters. Although we don't know alot about your characters, the relatively unusual use of first person female voice makes this real for me--in a most satisfying way. Thanks.

A real hot little story, you said more on one page than some do on 5 pages, loved it.

female first person is hot. Reading you describe the moments and actions was vivid and well appreciated. Keep up the fun work :)

It's great to know that there are some ladies who appreciate the texture of a generous splurting of cum, and who enjoy rubbing it on their bodies, even licking the love syrup from their fingers.

Very hot story, very descriptive and vivid! I wish he had pulled out and then shoved his cock back into your mouth and filled your mouth with his cum. There is always next time!

It got me very hot. if you suck and fuck as well as you write... Wow!