by seranade
I enjoyed it all, but the line beginning with chugga and those last few lines after that, aren't quite as good as the rest of the poem. Those first 4 or 5 stanzas are really good.
Your Poem has been mentioned on the New Poems Reviews for Tuesday 1st of February.
and here I thought you were in
poetic poem training? very nice!
You always seem to write great songs~
but then you call them ...seranades
Train of thought is an
excellent poem/seranade <grin>