All Comments on 'Train of thought'

I enjoyed it all, but the line beginning with chugga and those last few lines after that, aren't quite as good as the rest of the poem. Those first 4 or 5 stanzas are really good.

Your Poem has been mentioned on the New Poems Reviews for Tuesday 1st of February.

and here I thought you were in

poetic poem training? very nice!

You always seem to write great songs~

but then you call them ...seranades

Train of thought is an

excellent poem/seranade <grin>