All Comments on 'Her Brother, The Maniac 04'

This is a great story and I am enjoying it. I hope you keep going with it. I hope they can work things out and enjoy life together

I came so hard before the short but sweet chapter ended....specifically the part," She was bucking and bouncing up and down his prick like a little slut and she loved every bit of it"!

My god that part was so intense I came hard😊..

Also,I also liked the mention of pee or rather 'nectar ' as well...That's kinky..

And finally after that intense sex scene,it was a sweet momen when both siblings aid their 'I love you's' to each other...Very beautifully written.

I can't wait to read more about these two 'lovebirds' ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️'s as usual...

Thanks for the kind words. Unfortunately, I have had chapters 5 and 6 done but literotica wants me to put a censor on my work as they rejected chapters 5 and 6 so now I'm going to have to change some things.

when will you upload chapter 5 and 6 ?

Continue this series Ms.Rachel it's been a year and I really miss your work.....

I hope you come back to Lit. and post more of your offerings soon.....

great beginning of a great story .. we need more. it needs a finish of some kind.

AAAAAAAAAAAAAANNNNDDD it’s unfinished.

I am working on chapter 5 as we speak... Didn't realize the support and admiration i got from my writing so I might as well continue!

This story could be 6 or more part story.These are my thoughts but hey, they marry some where have 3 or 4 kids, live to an old age.This is what i think but then i am no writer.There are many stories written here that are not finished,or end so bloody weird, not finished.I hope to Christ you are not one of them.Show some of these silly buggers up on how to write a story and finish it.

Been more than 2 years and still no chapter 5. Even though you claimed that you were writing it 2 years ago, little one page chapters don't take more than a day or two to write. I can knock out 12000 words in 2 days which equates to 5 or more literotica pages. My one-page twiddle "Lisa and Kurt" only took an hour. I'm not going to hold my breath waiting for more. 3/5

Great story keep up the good work

pleasse, we need chapter 5

I guess you didn't survive covid or you would have finished this