All Comments on 'A Spring Cleaning Ch. 01'

This is a fantastic story, I applaud you!

Please continue to write (YOU have a gift)!!!

Well done...hope to see more.

Great start!

Very fun to read, and quite arousing. I liked it that you went into great detail about the "Cleaning" of his um, member.

I read the whole series then came back to chapter 1 to comment.

Great job! The story flowed nicely and possessed a variety of different scenarios so there was something for a variety of different tastes.

There was a sexual tension between them that you described well yet you also described the power differential well and described how her authority extends well outside the bedroom. Oh my god, I could not imagine how cold that shower would have been!!!!

My only criticism is that you stopped at Chapter 4. Hopefully that changes

Ugh! Why oh why do dudes find chastity and endless frustration appealing?