All Comments on 'The Package'

Silly story: no "background; not erotic

Ignore that anonymous "review." This story was meant simply to be a quick and sexy femdom scene, which it accomplishes well. Sure, characterization and build-up certainly underpin many erotic stories, but not all require such things to succeed. For a short read, this does a fine job firing up the old steam engine. I look forward to reading more of your work.

The bitch gets what she deserves. By the way this should be in nonconsent.