All Comments on 'Tim O'Brien - The Adventure Begins Ch. 01'

I get tired of penis sizes

Please write the next part soon!

Like Marcy, we all feel the need for more here Tim. You've got another 34 years, give or take, to fill us in on. Surely you have a few Greatest Hits we'd all love to hear.

"felt the ecstasy of releasing a full bladder, imagining that's what an orgasm felt like." You talk about how you jerk off later in the story but don't know what an orgasm feels like?

It had the feel of a young author from 1984, the excitement, naivety, and the enthusiasm of an 18 y/o rather than the fond memories of a retiree.