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Very good!
Mentioned in today's poetry review
You have
an exceptionally expressive way with words! You've managed to take the mundane detail of an ordinary winter's chill and turn it into a lyrical glory. Terrific poem - loved this! Thank you. LJ
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That last word brought this piece up to another level. It's no longer just a wonderfully descriptive piece about winter, but has a very human feel to which most can quickly relate {though I'd most prefer some Suisse Mocha}.
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,000 poems.
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Dayscene
First a Snowball fight ~ then inside for a hot cup of cocoa.
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