by cadeauxxx
Very good realistic plot. Good male lead. Lots to build upon if you so choose. Lots of Big BB in LA (to para phrase one of your stories). Jennifer may move on after Zeke gives her career a big booty boost but she uses him and he uses her. It fits for Hollywood and LA! Thanks for sharing
Ed
This story was terrific and could easily become a series. You've made a realistic setting and a likable character who is interesting and mysterious. Hope that you do more with this Zeke character in the future. I agree with the other comment that he and Jennifer use each other for their own personal gain and now you can do more with him in Hollywood. There's a lot of paths you could go with this as a series.
A few typos here and there but still a great story that makes up for it.
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Hey cadeauxxx,this is a very nice story,enjoyed it a lot,certainly every fan of her gonna enjoy this.
Listen,will you write a follow up to this? Because I think it deserves,or maybe writer others stories around Jennifer Lopez,it would be awesome
You could also do some work with Shakira,what do you think of her?
Congratulations
Hi there, I've been planning a new J-Lo story for a couple months and want to do one with Shakira as well. It all comes down to timing though. This has turned out to be a rough year with the pandemic and other things going on. I will definitely be writing more J-Lo though whenever I can get around to it! Thanks again for the kind words, appreciate it.