All Comments on 'At First Sight Ch. 01'

by Bonvivantlex

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olsaltyolsaltyalmost 6 years ago
Great Start going on here!

Looking forward to the next chapter--I'm betting they don't get far into looking at some job, before she bends over, calls him 'Sir' and he looses it and makes his move.....

You've got a hot scene building here, bring on some more!

BonvivantlexBonvivantlexalmost 6 years agoAuthor
Thanks, olsalty

I’m glad you like it. I hope to have the next ch up very soon. We’ll have plenty of fun with Ellie & Colton 😉

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

Barefoot and a summer dress. That is so nice.

WatcherRobWatcherRobalmost 6 years ago
Damn!!!

Chapter 1, Damn!!! This has HUGE potential.

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