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5 *****
Simply superb! It is all so well done, but I especially love the magpies and the twins. Those two strophes are flawless and are easily stand alones. Their final lines wrap things to perfection, like bacon around an oyster!
A marvelous composition! Thank you for an excellent read.
Amazing
work of art. Mentioned in today's review
Aliens emerge from the ether
and leave dramatic verse! This is a wild read, JC; glad to have you back!
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