All Comments on 'A Cleaning Affair'

by HeatherAnne12

Sort by:
  • 6 Comments
magpie45magpie45almost 6 years ago

That was good can you write some more and make it longer please

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
More

Chapter two please

Familyguy469Familyguy469almost 6 years ago
More

She has to come back next week and stay longer. They both need a good cum.

KissjoanieKissjoaniealmost 6 years ago
Great start

It is a wonderful story that needs more chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Past or present?

When you switch back and forth between past and present tense, the reader gets distracted and it's hard to get into the story. Please pick one tense and stick with it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Sex maybe? oral perhaps? NO NOTHING! that is what I thought of it.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous