All Comments on 'New White Shoes, Red Laces'

Very nice metaphors!

Thank you

Your poem has been mentioned in the New Poem thread at the poetry board.

there's something about those lil angels

that brring joy to a home <grin> and when

I was young and we got new shoes I'd run like the wind and believed I could run faster with new shoes,

well thats where My mind went, thanks Art~

cute and very good poem!

Those small faces

that don't care

their transmission is full power,

all frequencies channeling soul.

some excellent lines here Randi~

great poetry~

(hey Nin, I knew you'd like it~)

love your poem Randi~