Cute, funny, and sexy all wrapped up in one story! This was such a fun read. Great writing! Good luck!
Loved Jonas' unexpected surprises, and the lovemaking in the helicopter was a truly sexy addition. Outstanding!
You have a wonderful imagination and a great ability to put it to paper.
sexy, and funny. The helicopter pilot definitely had some steady hands to fly Jonas and Andi around. ;) Enjoyed! And good luck too!
To very unique characters in a fast, fun story. Good luck in the contest. Rumple
really like your stories about jonas and andrea, they're such a cute couple...hot too! you should write more
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Wow!
Cute, funny, and sexy all wrapped up in one story! This was such a fun read. Great writing! Good luck!
Fun, enticing read.
Loved Jonas' unexpected surprises, and the lovemaking in the helicopter was a truly sexy addition. Outstanding!
Imagination is a wonderful thing
You have a wonderful imagination and a great ability to put it to paper.
This is fresh,
sexy, and funny. The helicopter pilot definitely had some steady hands to fly Jonas and Andi around. ;)
Enjoyed! And good luck too!
New way to join the "Mile High" Club
To very unique characters in a fast, fun story. Good luck in the contest.
Rumple
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really like your stories about jonas and andrea, they're such a cute couple...hot too! you should write more
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