All Comments on 'Particle Accelerator'

by Sander Roscoe Wolff

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LiarLiarabout 19 years ago
Review...

Your poem have been mentioned in the New Poems tread at the poetry forum.

AngelineAngelineabout 19 years ago
Loved it!

You have a great ear for language. I think your poem has a natural musical rhythm. I love the subtle internal rhyme and assonanace, too. I really look forward to reading more by you. :)

Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnabout 19 years ago
Lovely

I like this a lot and feel you could tighten it a lot by cutting some word baggage. Nice feelings.

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