All Comments on 'Pool Party'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

Not exactly very much emotions in this story ....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
"Not exactly very much emotions in this story ...."

Pretty much what should have been expected from a story with such a cliched and banal title.

EasypeterEasypeteralmost 6 years ago
Needs work

Good title for a great story. We've been to a party like this and it was a great experience for raw sex.

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