All Comments on 'On A Sunday Afternoon'

by maker_of_seives

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Excellent 1st time submission.

Fantastic 1st time submission. Hope you submit many more, if you need any help or inspiration just let me know and I'll be only too happy to help.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Bound for glory

Excellent submissive stuff

RiokRiokover 18 years ago
Just what the slut deserves! Great story!!!

My cock got hard just imagining that was my hand spanking her ass and then almost came as he unloaded his cum into her nasty ass. Great story...especially for a first time submission (pun intended!). My only question is: does this beautiful author really want to be treated and fucked like that? If so......LET ME KNOW!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
breathtakingly beautiful

I am only 19 still a virgin and never even had an orgasm, boy your description lifeted my feelings to new hieghts, the nearest I have to cum?

Jo

jo_greeneyesjo_greeneyesover 17 years ago
breathtakingly beautiful

I am only 19 still a virgin and never even had an orgasm, boy your description lifeted my feelings to new hieghts, the nearest I have to cum?

Jo

jo_greeneyesjo_greeneyesover 17 years ago
breathtakingly beautiful

I am only 19 still a virgin and never even had an orgasm, boy your description lifeted my feelings to new hieghts, the nearest I have to cum?

Jo

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
I Moaned out Loud

The story made me moan for her. It takes a caring person to be a true master. Gorgously written.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Hot Read

exceptional

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