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Burn Baby Burn

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by Anonymous

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by Liar02/03/05

Review...

Your poem has been mentioned in the New Poem thread at the poetry board.

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by Du Lac02/04/05

Which way to the Grocery store...

Who the hell needs mechanical toys when you tell us how to have so much fun in the peel.... I really enjoyed this write.. made me hungry and running to the market!
Du~

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by Du Lac02/04/05

PS...

Bottle red heads have more fun.... honey anyone lol...
Du~

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by Maria239402/04/05

blush

what a sexy poem, Sandspike!! wow, I need something to cool me down now, ohh, you have me aching for the beach, :P loves your poem ;)

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by Syndra Lynn02/04/05

Bloody Brilliant

Your wonderful poems always make me lusty. This is a gem!

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by 02/06/05

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Weeee! This was great! Psst...this is in the non-erotic category.

layer tenderly
tits and toes
apply generously
lips and nose

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by LeBroz08/11/05

Do We Go for the Chardonnay or Edible Sun Block???

So lead me to 'em,
these high maintenance
sun block buyers;
I volunteer to maintain 'em

And washing down edible sun block
with chardonnay; topped off with a
chocolate chip laced delight, I can see -
I'll need fresh groceries every day...........

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by Bill Dada02/03/06

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Mmmmmmmmmmmm good.

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by Amyfriend02/21/07

Oh my...

this poem is almost as hot as tabasco sauce...haha. Well done.

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by tazz31712/14/11

THEIR IS NO CANCER SCARE

the sun can tan your flesh so rare. TK U MLJ LV NV

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