All Comments on 'Burn Baby Burn'

by sandspike

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LiarLiarabout 19 years ago
Review...

Your poem has been mentioned in the New Poem thread at the poetry board.

Du LacDu Lacabout 19 years ago
Which way to the Grocery store...

Who the hell needs mechanical toys when you tell us how to have so much fun in the peel.... I really enjoyed this write.. made me hungry and running to the market!

Du~

Du LacDu Lacabout 19 years ago
PS...

Bottle red heads have more fun.... honey anyone lol...

Du~

Maria2394Maria2394about 19 years ago
blush

what a sexy poem, Sandspike!! wow, I need something to cool me down now, ohh, you have me aching for the beach, :P loves your poem ;)

Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnabout 19 years ago
Bloody Brilliant

Your wonderful poems always make me lusty. This is a gem!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
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Weeee! This was great! Psst...this is in the non-erotic category.

layer tenderly

tits and toes

apply generously

lips and nose <smiles>

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
Do We Go for the Chardonnay or Edible Sun Block???

So lead me to 'em,

these high maintenance

sun block buyers;

I volunteer to maintain 'em

And washing down edible sun block

with chardonnay; topped off with a

chocolate chip laced delight, I can see -

I'll need fresh groceries every day...........

Bill DadaBill Dadaabout 18 years ago
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Mmmmmmmmmmmm good.

AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
Oh my...

this poem is almost as hot as tabasco sauce...haha. Well done.

tazz317tazz317over 12 years ago
THEIR IS NO CANCER SCARE

the sun can tan your flesh so rare. TK U MLJ LV NV

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