All Comments on 'Mary's Story'

The story has got a lot of potential but it is badly written, the characters have no real depth and it depicts bondage relationships in a wrong way. 1*

As she has a high profile job public humiliation & outdoor sex etc is a very bad idea.

The story is rough around the edges but shows promise

Regardless of the fact that she’s there voluntarily you still need to state obvious things- or at least I hope they’re obvious, such as hard limits, safe words etc.

Not explaining those factors makes them seem like dangerous amateurs, and of course if they don’t actually have those things in place then they are sadistic arseholes who enjoy torturing people.

Tess (UK)